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Arachne    Topic opened August 08, 2007, 01:43:57 AM

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Disenchanted spinner of syllables

Mathias and Plynk

Okay, so this is based in a world my friend Aubra and I created for an rpg called Keitsul. The rpg crashed, and we were left with a surplus of burgeoning creativity. We've both written a few short stories, but this will be my explanation for the discovery of electric power in Keitsul.

Here it is:

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*runs away*
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She’ll come at dusky first of day,
   White over yellow harvest’s song
      Upon her dewy rainbow way
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Hasuko Reply #1 in Mathias and Plynk; catalysts for change — Posted August 08, 2007, 01:49:50 AM

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Evil Goth Loli.

I'm in no shape to offer any sort of helpful, editing critique right now, so I'll just say uh.. well-done! XD I like it.
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御人形だから倫理もへっちゃらみたいです・・・
Arachne Reply #2 in Rougue's random excerpts — Posted December 31, 2007, 04:33:43 PM

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Disenchanted spinner of syllables

Some days, it becomes easy to believe that this was all there ever was. Some days, I can become the monster that everyone expects of me. My temple is riddled with broken columns of marble and granite, the bodies of all who have come to vanquish me, to rid the world of my malevolent presence; I recall some of them, and oft gaze on the countenances of those lost.
   I watch the tepid pools of water, the reedy thrumming of insects my sole companion. I dare to measure my own countenance, to look into the very eyes which forever end the beating of men’s hearts; the sole feature left to me that isn’t twisted and warped beyond all aesthetic recognition, a goddess’s wrath come to visit damnation upon me. The ground is cool and moist through the thin rags that I adorn myself with, as I sit at the edge of a vast and murky pool of water. My skin feels cold, rough to the touch, as I wrap my arms about my curled legs and study the face I see reflected in the sullen sunlight that reluctantly reaches through the twisting, twining branches of the cypress trees.
   Once, I was beautiful. But that face is a memory I’ve all but forgotten, the lines of it lost to the madness that has overtaken me. Scarred and pocked, riddled with the texture of broken rock, I can no longer see who I once was; where once draped golden twists of twining corkscrew curls, I’ve matted and filthy dreadlocks. Or so I tell myself. When I look too closely, they begin to move of their own accord, tiny pink tongues flickering out to taste the air, a coif of serpents- as if my deathly gaze and hideous appearance weren’t punishment enough, the constant whisperings of their voices attend my every thought, and I am driven further from sanity.
   But there are days when I can pretend to be nothing more than Medusa; when I can pretend not to hear them, and merely stare, lost, into the pits and hollows of this ragged, rotten countenance… when I can try to remember who I was before Poseidon.





Just an idea. It's rough, at the moment, but I'm liking the concept.
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She’ll come at dusky first of day,
   White over yellow harvest’s song
      Upon her dewy rainbow way
         She shall be beautiful and strong...


-Francis Ledwidge
MeowBerry Reply #3 in Rougue's random excerpts — Posted December 31, 2007, 05:11:28 PM

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Holy fuck that was awesome! Write more!
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