Author Topic: The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"  (Read 6224 times)

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« on: August 22, 2008, 01:59:22 PM »
(click to show/hide)

You know what? You're tired.

More over, you're bitter. You just bombed that test. There's no way in hell you're going to past Anatomy this semester. It's just a laughable thought. Why even study for the final? Janice and Ted just arrived in Manhattan for the weekend. Their uncle is letting them use his penthouse over Central Park without limits. Do you want to waste the rest of your life worrying about if you're ever going to become a doctor or are you going to board the Metro North Train and live it up for once in your life?

This is the third time you've told yourself this. The conductor is looking at you very annoyed. He's held the door open for you out of kindness, but now it seems he is still doing it to hit you on the head when you enter.

_God, this is stupid. I can probably make up with a passing grade if I just Ace the final. I should get back ho..._

Your internal monologue is cut off as a very handsome guy and his hot girlfriend ram you into the train, trying to get in it themselves. You find yourself on the floor of the train car, looking up to see the Conductor helping the couple up and telling them their tickets are no good here. He gives you an eye and a little smirk and asks for your ticket without helping you up.

_That little ass... who pissed in his cheerios?_

The 30 minute ride into the city is uneventful for the most part. Idle chit chat that you're trying to focus in and drown out, anything to get your mind off your future. A lot of planning on getting really drunk and partying of asses in the attempt to shake them off. Nothing you were ever into. You silently wonder how people can be happy like that? There seems to be little basis on...

_God... Christ, what is that?_

It's beyond anything you ever felt before. It's... it's pressure, that's for sure. But it's no where on you. But you can't help but to feel oppressed, pushed down upon as the world watches casually. Your mind cycles off medical conditions quickly, worrying that this might be a stroke or even something worse. You check your motor control. Everything is moving just as you'd like. You don't taste or smell anything odd. Your vision is normal... it simply feels if you take another five seconds of this, you're going to implode.

_And what the hell is with all the what's?! I can't focus!_

You look around the car. People are asking each other constantly what did they mean by that or what did they say or something of the life. Others, even weirder still, look off into space and are answering things that aren't there. Even the Conductor seemed to be affected, looking out the window on the door and rocking himself gently back and forth. The elderly lady sitting next to you looks at you and starts to giggle. Which leads to chuckling. With leads to the boldest laughter you ever heard on your life.

But it doesn't stop there. This lady is laughing at you so hard that her face twists into hysteria. Reason is gone. Compassion. It's like her whole existence is just based on laughing at you. So much so that her body can't handle it. Drool starts coming out from her mouth. Her body fights for her to stop so it can relax, but she doesn't. Her muscle tense and seize, but she continues. The pain is obvious in her eyes, but she can't help herself.

You quickly stand up on the still moving train car, minutes before you go into the underground second of Metro North, which means the next stop is Grand Central. If you can get the Conductor to radio for help, maybe help can meet her when they dock.

The rest of the train isn't fairing any better.

That attractive couple that knocked you on the train... the woman is savagely beating on her boyfriend's chest after clawing at his eyes. Blood dribbles down his face as he mumbles something about "we're arriving, they're arriving, it's arriving".

What you can only assume were those party girls who were only interested in getting wasted now stand in the aisle, their foreheads pressed upon one another and seemingly chanting... What, you can't tell over the din of the rest of the train.

You run to the Conductor and grab at his arm to turn him around, to face what the hell is happening on this train... but you can't. There shouldn't be any reason for it. He's not that bigger than you. On the slight side. But even bracing yourself does nothing in moving this man. The Conductor just stands there, with is forehead at the window, swaying side to side.

That's when you feel a hand at your shoulder.

With all that's happening, you don't take any chances. You turn and you knock your fist, ready to knock out any psycho approaching you. What you see, however, is a very frightened woman about your age who shields herself from your threat. She seems to have reasoning.

"PLEASE! PLEASE DON'T! I'M SORRY!!"

You drop your fist and grab her by her arms. "Are you ok?! Are you normal?!" Your latest threat on her safety has proven a bit too much for her to bare. And you can't blame her. However, you just don't have time. "ARE YOU NORMAL?!"

"YES," she screams through sobs. "I AM NORMAL! JUST... just please don't hurt me..."

You bring her into your arms and you hold her. You feel like you're about to cry too. Suddenly, your test seems to be really insignificant.

"I'm not going to hurt you," You try in your most even tone. " It's just.. what's happening on this train..."

"A MOTHER TRIED TO FORCE HER LITTLE BOY INTO AN OVERHEAD COMPARTMENT! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH THESE PEOPLE?!"

You fight every urge to see what she's talking about. You just don't think you have it in you to try to reason that out just now. You don't even know if you should still be holding you, but you are. And she's holding on to your tight also.

"I... I don't know what's going on."

"And you don't want to."

You and the girl you were holding turn to the first normal voice you've heard in a while. It's the conductor, his head bloodied from grinding it into the window. The window is cracked behind him. Calling his appearance disheveled would be a compliment. However, he doesn't seem to notice. In fact, judging by his face, he's having a good time with life as a whole.

"I have to go now, kids. Trust me. It will be terrible."

Without a beat passing, the Conductor is sucked threw the Quarter-sized hole he created in the window in the door. Little bits of him and most of his clothes still remained in the car.

You instinctively backed up, keeping the girl behind you. She is shrieking louder than anything on the train.. which seems to gotten everyone's attention. They stand up and form a crowd around you. Those who can't get near you, you can see looking at you between legs or over shoulders. You two are the hot ticket. And everyone can't wait to get a piece of you.

It's silent now, other than the train rocketing down the tracks and the constant sobbing of the girl behind you. Except.... Except for the laughter. it's coming from behind the crowd and moving closer. The Elderly lady sitting next to you before pushes her way out of the crowd.She's still pointing, she's still laughing, and somehow, she's convinced the entire population of the train car to do the same. The crowd of people go to fits of hysterics over you two. You close your eyes and await the worse.

And that's when you smell smoke.

You open your eyes, and the Elderly woman beings to ash. From her outstretched fingertip up toward her body, she burns up like a cigarette. It doesn't stop her laughing. Nor does it stop the rest of the crowd when it happens to them. They are being reduced to ash and they don't have a care in the world. There's no fire, there is no medical condition that does this... These people are burning up in the most severe way possible without any reason why.

After a minute, the laughter stops. There's no one left to laugh. Everyone is now an ash statue of themselves. The train finally docks into the station. After the normal few seconds, the doors open, creating a breeze that collapses the Ash Statues. The Girl behind you has fainted, who knows how long ago.

You hear yelling and screaming outside. It sounds intelligible, and it sounds to be only a few distinct voices. You clean your eyes and look out the door. It's dark. Completely dark. The station has no lights. There are lights in the car, spilling out to the black void of the Manhattan station, but that just makes it even more creepy. You'd made it a point to always come into Manhattan with a bookbag that contains a flashlight and a swiss army knife ever since getting stuck in the black out, so you could navigate your way out into the street... but do you want to risk those voices being more insane people?

Option 1.) Stay in the car and hide, bringing the girl with you. Hopefully, you can find a good place to see if these people are normal
Option 2.) Stay in the car and hide, but leave the girl where she is. See how they react to her if they spot her
Option 3.) Try to sneak out into the darkness and make your way to safety alone. You can't risk her tipping them off to you two by making noise when she wakes up
Option 4.) Try to sneak out into the darkness with her. She seems light and you just can't leave her to fend for herself
Option 5.) Try to see if those voices are sane or not
Option 6.) Try to wake her up and get her input
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"

Offline sinic

  • Certified Organic
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 7,530
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • Slack.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #1 on: August 22, 2008, 02:48:02 PM »
Option 4 will lead to her waking up mid-carry and of course alerting everyone to your presence.  I don't really care about her opinion, but might as well go with 6 and hopefully she doesn't scream.
"All it takes for evil to triumph is for good men to do nothing." – Edmund Burke

http://sinicfug.mybrute.com/

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #2 on: August 22, 2008, 03:59:07 PM »
_Think, think, what's a way to wake her up that she won't freak out? I mean, how could she freak out? We're just covered in the ashes of everyone in the car, she doesn't know me, and I'm going to be above her frantic._

All that time you spend trying to think up a way to wake her up, you begin to notice that the yelling is starting to calm itself down. There's still yelling, to be sure, but it's controlled. The tones are worried. To you, that sounds like someone who's sane enough to understand this is a worrisome situation.

_To Hell with it._

You shake her. No use. Harder. Nothing. Finally, you remember what your brother used to do to you when you were trying to sleep. You lean close into her ear and you make really disgusting noises. You can see her being affected by it. Not taking a moment to be surprised that it worked, you continue. She stirs and her eyes open. You recognize the face she's making. It's the 'I'm going to yell really loudly" face. It's not something you want to see.

You clamp your hand over her mouth and hope she understands this is for the best. She promptly does not. She thrashes and looks around. Ash, the blood stains behind you, the empty suits and dresses on the floor, slightly burned. After she takes this all in, she thrashes much more and starts to add claws into the mix.

"No, please, please remember! All the crazy people in the train, remember?! We were the only two who weren't affected?! I was trying to get the Conductor to... God, I don't even remember what. But please, please. There are voices outside and they could be more of them!"

"We aren't."

You both turn around to the door way where four people now stand, also covered in ash. Probably wasn't the best of ideas to take your eyes off of the girl, since her new scream almost makes you go in your pants.

"Not handling this well, is she."

You slump back against the wall and look at guy who said that. "She's not the only one, buddy."

"You know what," begins another one of the guys in the group. "I think you're both handling it like fucking champions. But me and the girls aren't. It's dark, people exploded on me, and my cell is done. And what the fuck is that clinking noise?!"

Stupidly, you didn't even think about calling for help on your cell phone. You bring it up and the black guy, who's been holding on to a piece of pipe and looking at you and out into the darkness off and on, shakes his head. "There's nothing out there. We've been trying. Not a dial tone. Just... God, it sounds an long drawn out... death rattle."

"Damnit," The Nervous guy peering into the darkness whispers angrily "Do you seriously have to say shit like that? It's a weird sound. Great. Let's not make it sound any worse than it is..."

The Black guy turns to face the Nervous guy, letting the pipe drop to his side. "What does that help? I'm just trying to tell h..." It's at this time do you notice the large red blot on the underside of the pipe he's holding.

"Tell a story at a bar for all I care! You and your new best friend can get drunk on me, I'll keep them coming. But you know, I'm not going to stand here with my thumb up my ass listening to shit like that when all I want to do is get out of here!"

"S-s-stop it! just s-stop it!" That was the first time you heard the girl speak. She seemed... numb at first, but she began breaking down when the two started their discord. "Can we p-p-please just go?!"

The first guy, the one doing his best to try to keep a level head, places a hand on her shoulder and looks at her with soft eyes and the most reassuring smile he could put on at this moment. He then turns back to you and says: "We're going to try to find some help. I never seen this place so d... abandoned. You're welcome to come too. Your friend seems to have calmed down a bit. Is she hurt? Do we need to help you with her?"

Option 1.) They seem normal enough, and you don't have any better ideas... try to find help together.
Option 2.) Don't move until you question them and see what they know about the situation
Option 3.) People who ash for no reason, Conductors sucked out of window holes with nothing doing the sucking? You can only trust the girl and yourself.
Option 4.) Bleh, you can't even trust the Girl. Leave them be, find some help for yourself, and hope that you'll never have to think about this again
Option 5.) You know what? it's been a hard day. Let's try to have a little. Start laughing uncontrollably and see how they act
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"

Offline Majestrix

  • Sociopathic Queen of Evil Ponies
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 8,636
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • The Sociopathic Queen Of Evil. And Ponies.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2008, 07:22:58 AM »
I would go with option 5 but then again, I'm out of my mind.
She broke your heart and inadvertently led men to deviant lifestyles.

Offline Vel

  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,128
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • All these bitches checkin out my britches.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2008, 10:21:09 PM »
Damn it, Maj, don't make them pipe us. I feel like no one is trustworthy, but going off alone = certain death (no exceptions).

So... for the moment, let's do option 1. For the moment. Hopefully Pipe Guy got that shit on his pipe from bashing scary guys heads in.
"When I was around her, I felt like a goblin made entirely out of wicked genitals."

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2008, 11:40:24 PM »
Ummm... I'm not totally sure if Maj suggested that we do option 5, or that she would if she were in their shoes, but doesn't want to do it now. So I'm going with Vel.

-----

You look back at... Damn, you don't even know her name. And you don't really care. This is not the sort of situation where a meet and greet is necessary. But then again, shouting 'Hey You!' probably wouldn't be as helpful as you might like.

"I don't know really know. Are you fine, miss...?" you let your tone trail off suggesting that she follows up with something.

She pauses for a moment, almost as she is unsure of your purpose at this moment. Finally, she offers: "Nicolette. I can move, but I'm far from fine. What the hell happened when I blacked out? Where are all the people that go along with the suits."

"That's a mighty fine fucking question," The nervous gun chimes in, still peering into the darkness. "But one better asked on the move. Any body smoke? I can't see shit out here and a lighter might help.

The girl in the group weakly told them that she gave up two months ago, which created a nervous laughter from her, the guy in charge, and the Black guy with the pipe. You look at Nicolette, but she shakes her head no. It's at that moment that it dawns on you that you're an idiot but a paranoid genius at the same time. You fish through your bag and you pull out your LED flashlight. Not as bright as the other guys, but it gets the job done and the bulb never goes out. Everyone looks at you with mouths agape.

"What," you start, uneasy with the scrutiny but still a little more comfortable that you can explain something about today. "Was I the only one trapped in downtown Manhattan during the black outs? Tell me you didn't think that you'd never travel in Manhattan without one during that."

The Black guy smiles. "Yeah, but seriously, that was 2004. I admit, I did it for like a week, but I forgot all about it," He says, shifting his weight while unclenching his body just a bit. He obviously works out. That Pipe is probably a good weapon in his hands... Maybe you shouldn't let that easy going smile fool you.

"2003", the nervous guy corrects. "So, why doesn't the true blue scout and the home run king take point? We'll cover your asses."

Home Run King? You notice the black guy tense at that. Very uneasy about whatever that means, but you don't count yourself a genius for piecing together that it might have something to do with the red splotch on the pipe.

"How about you not call me that, ok? The name's Raphael. You can call me Raph."

Dude in charge is quick to pick up on the opportunity that arises. "It's not a bad idea to know who we are. I'm Brent."

The Nervous guy sighs and folds his arms, looking at the floor like he's being punished just by listening to all of you. He reluctantly gives you "Lincoln"

"Bobby"

Raph smirks at that. Bobby notices and goes into a probably well worn routine. "I don't like the name Roberta, ok?" Raph raises his hands in mock surrender, smiling a bit more. He does seem easy going. But that makes you a little more suspicious. Who the hell is easy going at a time like this? Before you can dwell too much on that, Brent nods in your direction. "And you?"

"I'm..."

The thunderous boom that cut you off is so potent that not only does it knock you off your feet, but it's damn near shaking the train off the tracks. Everyone goes tumbling down, scrambling for safety and cover in the dark. The boom is followed by another. And another. You pray to anything listening for the hopeless; That you're not in the city for another attack. It would explain it. Some type of chemical weapon you six just happened to be immune to. Now they are finishing it off with the bombing. You're not alone in your suspicions as you can... well not hear that well, but see Lincoln cursing Al-Queda and fucking Terrorists. After a minute and a half of the most terrifying minutes of your life, the booming stops. Your immediate Response is to thank whatever listened to you.

Then it sounded.

You couldn't even describe it because it was just too loud to discern. Somewhere in the back of your head, you're sure that you are going to go deaf from this if your head does not explode.

You're not sure when it stops, but you are sure that you're starting to hear again. There's a weird white noise, like a rushing feedback you get after you dance near the speakers too long when you go out.

What's bad is when you perfectly hear Lincoln yell "WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT?!". It takes a moment, but you realize something: That's not White Noise. That's footsteps. A Cacophony of foot steps. Running, flooding out to the exits of Grand Cental, you guess, because with how loud that is and how long you hear it for... whoever was running would have probably trampled over you six by now.

After a while, the foot steps decrease. Even to the point where you can hear the comical last footsteps out. But there really isn't anything Comical about it. You've been a New Yorker all your life. There is no way that Grand Central could hold as many people it would take to make that cacophony. No Spacial way at all.

Brent stands up first. He looks at everyone, asking quickly if they are ok. When he gets his 'yes's, he gives the order to move out. Of course, Lincoln doesn't like the idea.

"ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR FUCKING MIND?! DID... WHERE... WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK IS HAPPENING?!"

"Look, I don't know and I'm starting not to care. Molly is waiting for me out there. I have to get to her. And maybe one of those people out there is running away from this place for a reason. We'll never know unless we ask them and find out."

"They could be Fucking Hamas for all we know! The Russians could have invaded! BOMBS WERE JUST DROPPED ON US!"

Brent looked around. "Does anyone have a better idea?"

Option 1.) Brent's Plan. You need to know what the hell happened.
Option 2.) Lincoln's Thought. Could be terrorists. Could be worse. Just sneak the hell out without bumping into anyone (1-10 Evens/Odd)
Option 3.) Secret Option 1. Sneak around all Solid Snake like, find a stray whoever they are and judge if they are friend and for through integration (1-10 Evens/Odd)
Option 4.) Secret Option 2. Be a wuss and suggest you all stay there until help arrives
Option 5.) Secret Option Lambda Lambda Lambda. State that we should all be like Raph: Cool and Black.
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"

Offline S*S

  • Taller, Darker, Sexier Hugh Grant. No! Really!
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 9,112
  • Renown: +3/-65535
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2008, 01:14:33 PM »
Option 1. Staying put is for pussies and never works. The people that stay put always wind up dead half way through the movie in an inconsequential cutaway, or the others come back to find them all dead.
"You know, Johnny, watching your love life is like watching aliens fuck. You're not sure what exactly is going on, but it's both enchanting and uncomfortable." -Kyle J Cardoza
What are good/neutral things about me?/Bad things about me?

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2008, 10:30:48 PM »
"Hey, maybe they know something we don't, we should get after them and find out what's going on."

A unified idea was probably what this group needed. Everyone seemed to be on varying degrees of "on edge", so having a plan was, at the very least, comforting. That didn't stop Lincoln from bitching about it, but you're pretty sure nothing could.

However, you do take up his formation. Raph didn't ever tell you what that blood was doing on that pipe, but it still felt good to be next to someone who's armed and looks like he could put up a hell of a fight.

But that also has to be balanced with how much of a freaking target you must be right now. You are the only moving light source in a very, very dark place. You briefly wonder if the fuses are out, but you then realize that you wouldn't even begin to know what to do if that was the case. Better to just keep your ears and eyes open.

You haven't heard a sound since the stampede. Is that a good thing or bad, you're still trying to figure out.

Your muscles, as tense as they are, follow memory and walk up the ramp to the stairs leading to Grand Central's most well known area: The ticket floor above ground where all the restaurants and newspaper stands are. However, there should be more light here. At this time of night, it shouldn't be dark enough make the main hall as dark as it was, but you still need your flashlight to see where you're going.

There is sound now. A dull, metal on metal creaky sound overhead. It reminds you of when you use to swing on the playground, but the sounds aren't away where as fast as back then. Lifeless swing. Unnerving, given the fact that you were just here two days ago and there was nothing over head that should ever make that sound. You fight every urge in your body to put your light up. Instinctively, you feel looking up there would be a very very bad idea.

"Umm" Bobby begins. "Our cells are all out of service. But if I remember correctly, the ticket window has land lines. Should we try them?"

"Not a bad idea. Anyone disagree?" No one responds to Brent. "Fine, we'll go with Bobby's plan. In this darkness, I think anyone would call out for help if they saw this flashlight. We call. If the lines are all... disposed, we'll just go out and search for someone."

Solid plan. You point the flashlight in the direction of where the ticket booth should be until you find it. But you've noticed something. The walls seem to be further out than you remembered. The flashlight doesn't have enough brightness that you can tell if there's just something in front of it, so you have to wait until you get clo... Wait. Those.. That's...

"Are those... folded clothes?"

Hundreds of them. Folded neatly and with care... and ashy. You quickly turn around the hall, looking around all the walls and they all have clothes folded stacked in front of them.

"Who.. would do such a thing?" That strikes you as the first time Lincoln has said anything without a curse in it. Apparently not wanting to answer or even think about it, Raph pulls the clothes out of the way and tries the door to the ticket booth. It's unlocked. He tries to push it open, but stumbles. recentering himself, he puts his shoulder against the door and pushes for all he's worth. The door is moving, but not quick enough for you.

Passing the flashlight to Nicolette, you join Raph with your shoulder. You're embarrassed to say you're not really doing much to help, but the door is opening. Finally it's open enough that you two can squeeze in, followed by the rest of the group. That's when the lights turn on.

All of you jump for a second, and then are overwhelmed with normalcy. You've never been so happy to see something as simple as a light turn on in your life. It took a while for your eyes to adjust, but you can see the firehose and axe (must have been built a long time ago), the file cabinets (some of which were put up against the door, and the machines. The glorious machines, all now coming to life and full of shiny lights.

"But.. why aren't the lights in the hall turning on?"

The celebration stops as you one by one peer out of the ticket window to notice that Bobby's right. For some reason, only the ticket booth's lights came on. However, you don't really have time to ponder that. That once lifeless and dull metal on metal creaking sound has now become a full on swinging party. You're sure you hear animal sounds, but you don't have a clue what animal sounds like that.

But you can tell very easily it's agitated.

You move away from the glass, as does Raph. You two seem to have some survival instinct. The rest, however, continue peering out the ticket windows. You could have sworn that it's actually becoming darker out there... Even the natural luminescence coming from the room seems to be receding on the outside. Peering out the doorway, you can actually see darkness pushing back the light. Perhaps it would be a good idea to have Raph help you close tha...

Three mangled and rotted arms shoot through the service opening at the bottom of the ticket window. You've seen zombie movies, you study medicine for God's sakes. You thought you were used to seeing dead-looking flesh. This flesh, while dead, still pulsated. The space wasn't big enough for all the arms, so the one furthest to the right ripped up, leaving a large section of flesh on the other side of the window. And it pumped out black fluid just as normally as blood would have... wait... black fluid?

The hands moved lightning quick, grabbing a still recoiling Lincoln before he could get away. He screamed bloody murder as Raph went to his side, wailing away with that everpresent pipe of this... to little avail. The arms seemed to register the pain, letting go with every good hit, but they were determined to hold on to Lincoln, digging into his flesh with their claws.

Your mind went back to the door. The owners of those arms could still squeeze through, just like you all did. You could barely move the door with Raph helping you. You can't help but to think in your panicked state of mind, you're overlooking something easy...

The axe?

Option 1.) Grab the axe and start hacking away (1-10 Evens/Odd)
Option 2.) Close the door (1-10 Evens/Odd) then grab the axe and start hacking away (1-10 Evens/Odd, yes, you need to make two picks for this option)
Option 3.) Try to reason with the arms outside. They obviously need help just as you do.
Option 4.) Don't get involved. You might need to run later.
Option 5.) Go out the door and hope they focus on the group instead of you. Time to fucking leave.
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"

Offline Majestrix

  • Sociopathic Queen of Evil Ponies
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 8,636
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • The Sociopathic Queen Of Evil. And Ponies.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #8 on: August 26, 2008, 03:09:57 AM »
I say Option 2, but I don't understand how to do evens odds.
She broke your heart and inadvertently led men to deviant lifestyles.

Offline Crystal

  • Snuggly Supervillainess
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,143
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • Adorkable.
    • View Profile
    • Oh look, a blog
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #9 on: August 26, 2008, 03:32:56 AM »
Maj:  pick a number from one to ten and then pick either evens or odds.  That's all he means.   :)>-
A friend disappointed me a short while ago. She e-mailed a message with the subject line 'Trap Neuter Return' and the message had nothing to do with the Duggar family. *sad* -Hippie
I must be the most frequently "almost sigged" person on the forum.  -fixer
Oh look, a blog.

Offline Majestrix

  • Sociopathic Queen of Evil Ponies
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 8,636
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • The Sociopathic Queen Of Evil. And Ponies.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #10 on: August 26, 2008, 04:29:38 AM »
So, for closing the door, 8 with evens, and for grabbing the axe, 7 with evens?  Like that?
She broke your heart and inadvertently led men to deviant lifestyles.

Offline S*S

  • Taller, Darker, Sexier Hugh Grant. No! Really!
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 9,112
  • Renown: +3/-65535
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #11 on: August 26, 2008, 08:07:44 AM »
This depends. Do the ticket windows seem to be made of hard plastic or shatterproof glass? If so, option 2, and I choose 7 and 8 respectively.

If it's just regular glass, then fuck sealing ourselves in here, it's pointless. Let's just grab the axe and start pruning zombie limbs at random, until they figure out a way to get inside and take the fight to us. 10.
"You know, Johnny, watching your love life is like watching aliens fuck. You're not sure what exactly is going on, but it's both enchanting and uncomfortable." -Kyle J Cardoza
What are good/neutral things about me?/Bad things about me?

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #12 on: August 26, 2008, 12:26:09 PM »
PASS,FAIL

Jesus Christ, what are you, stupid?! You're on the other side of the door, all you need to do is push it closed now. You don't need to push the File Cabinets with the door! You run over to the door and slam it shut. "Nicolette! Brent! Move these Cabinets back against the door!" Not another thought goes to it as you see them moving to your order. You need to get that Axe and help Lincoln.

You whip open the glass door and pull out the fire axe. You never held one before. The weight of such a small looking thing is deceptive. You want to rethink if this is a good idea, you never used one of these things before... But Lincoln's screams are getting louder. Where those arms are digging, if you don't get some medical attention there soon, there will probably be nothing you can do medically without a hospital... He'll bleed out.

Racing over there, yelling for Raph to get out of the way, you raise your axe high and swing it down with a sickening 'goosh'ing sound when you make contact. You could feel the slice of bone, muscles and ligaments, creeping you out to your core. _Ok, definitely not going to be a Surgeon..._

Although, Paul Bunyan, you have a problem. The swing from your mighty axe did sever two of their arms, but you managed to actually get the blade wedged into the wood. You're not to busy being impressed with the might of your swing, but more preoccupied trying to pry it loose.

Lincoln took his new freedom to his advantage, and twisted his body to give him more leverage to pry himself loose. But the remaining hand just dug in further, making his new position ever more painful to him. In a desperate bid for relief, he ran back to his original position quickly, banging his body at the counter.

If what happened next would have been funny, it would have been called a comedy of errors. Lincoln's zeal to stop the pain made him hurry towards the counter again. Kinetic force doesn't just bleed off once you stop, you'll still have to move a bit, which his head did, towards the ticket window and where the remaining hand were located. You just happened to pry loose the axe. The good news is that Lincoln's recoil saved himself from having the pick part of the axe buried into his face. Bad news is the the blunt part did make contact, knocking him out with the force of your blow, making him fall to the ground. You look stunned. Raph just acts. He plunged the end of the pipe into the last hand, making it release and withdraw.

You hear running away, but the unnatural darkness prevents you from seeing anything. Not something to focus on, Lincoln is losing a lot of blood. Looking around, you see some med kit supplies under the counter. You take them out, get down on your knees, and hope to anything Holy that your studying has paid off.

-Saving throw. Bandage Lincoln's arm well. If fail, he bleeds out and dies. (1-10 Evens/Odd)
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"

Offline Zahnnie

  • Princess of Bel-Air [Freshly]
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 8,156
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • I *heart* pie (sexily).
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #13 on: August 26, 2008, 12:28:25 PM »
3 Odd!
S*S: Yes, mature. It's not just a genre of porn anymore!
Adam the Alien: A makeout a day keeps the cancer away.
Barefoot Hostess Good things? / Bad things?
Marra, Swan's Hart | Jennifer Corby, Cormorant Island

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #14 on: August 26, 2008, 01:11:01 PM »
PASS

If Tight Ass Henderson could see you now, he's probably wouldn't give you any grief for showing up as late as you did all semester. Hey, you needed the class beforehand and there were no other options to transfer into. Isn't your fault you had to race across the city for his stupid class.

But you're putting your knowledge to good use. You admit taking a little too much happiness in cleaning the wound. It hurts so bad that he's gritting his teeth even while he's out cold. You tell yourself that it's because he made a cute pain face, but in reality you know it was because he was getting on your nerves this whole time.

Taking your time pays off. The dressing is nice, but it will have to be changed very soon. The top of it is already a bloody mess. He should still get serious medical attention. You're just a student after all. You collapse on your ass, not sure where the energy will come from to handle any more of this crap.

A hand is put in front of your face. It's Raph, who's smiling down at you. You take it and he lifts you up. "What are you, a doctor or something?"

"Getting there. Slowly but surely."

"Don't know about the slowly, but I can get behind the surely." You can't help but to smile at his comment. It's nice to feel useful, but it's even better to be good at what you do. "I got your back any time if you got mine."

"Then consider your back got, Raph."

You turn to see what everyone else is doing. Bobby doesn't seem to be fairing well. She's biting her nails and looking at Lincoln and the severed hands on the floor. Nicolette is doing to comfort her, but you can also tell she's doing her best not to look over also, busying herself with being there for Bobby.

Brent is actually at the hands, studying them from a far with a towel or something over his face, poking at them with a ruler. He doesn't look that happy. He looks over at you three, and then nods to Lincoln. IT's understood what he meant.

"I'm going to have to clean it and change it again pretty soon, I'm just worried if he sustained a con..." People keep cutting you off today. This time, it's Lincoln, who comes to and is groaning at the pain. Raph goes down on one knee and tries to steady him. He's asking Lincoln a couple of questions, trying to gauge his mind and his wits by his answers. Huh. Well, at least you don't have to. You look over at Brent with an amused "Who knew?" face, but he doesn't return the amusement at all. What he does is wave you over.

You meet at the corner of the room where he gives you an extra towel, telling you to put it on your face. This is not comforting you. "Ok, long story short, I'm somewhat of a scientist. With the advanced decomp of these hands yet they are still moving, I'm more likely to believe Lincoln's rantings. The only way I can explain this is a chemical weapon. Not the likes of one I ever seen. From what Lincoln told me, he was in the same Train car as Raph. And those people who didn't... Ash, started to boil over. And started to attack those few who didn't go crazy or boil over like everyone else. Raph ripped off one of those support pipes that they use to frame the posters next to the entry doors and beat them back. If the chemical agent has two properities, one of..." he has trouble even forming this thought. "Actual spontaneous combustion and this... near madness with the boil side effect.... well, I don't have to tell you what troubles we might be in."

It dawns on you. You're in New York City on a Saturday night. There's about 10 million people in the city at any given time. And if the numbers of who were affected and who ashed is anything like the ratio of the train ride in.... You're probably up shit's creek.

"Brent, this doesn't make sense... I mean, why would anyone..."

"Hey, you're studying medicine, does that," He points to the arms. "...happen in nature?"

You have to shake your head no.

"And I know for a fact that certain... powers on the world are trying to make a chemical weapon that gets rid of the populous, but leaves the city and its resources intact. Not only trying, but were close. Look, I really don't have time to convince you, I need to find Molly, but I need you guys with me. I can't do this alone. However... if we did have some natural immunity to this, we can't discount the fact that maybe, for some reason or the other we just didn't get a high enough dosage. Those hands leaked fluids into Lincoln. And he might turn into a danger to us."

You look at Lincoln. From how he's reacting to Raph's questioning, he seems to have his wits about him. You still haven't checked for a concussion.

"Whatever we decide," Brent says. "We have to decide it now. We don't know if we scared those people off, or if they are regrouping."

Option 1.) Stay and observe Lincoln. You're barricaded in, you have weapons and you fought them off before.
Option 2.) Give the marching orders. This place is a death trap, and Brent's right, you don't know if they are coming back with reinforcements.
Option 3.) Bring these fears up with the group and have an open discussion about it.
Option 4.) Leave Lincoln here. You can't risk it...
Option 5.) Take your axe, take your flashlight, and hoof it out by yourself. Brent's not the only one who has to find people.
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"

Offline sinic

  • Certified Organic
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 7,530
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • Slack.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #15 on: August 26, 2008, 01:25:25 PM »
Autobots.... ROLL OUT!

(Option 2)
"All it takes for evil to triumph is for good men to do nothing." – Edmund Burke

http://sinicfug.mybrute.com/

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #16 on: August 27, 2008, 01:00:33 AM »
It's very strange. Brent, a man of science, is so ready to make a huge leap. Infected crazy people as a biological weapon? He's said he's seen or at least heard of weaponized viruses, but that's not something you can validate with a simple 'Can I see proof of Scientist Status Badge', now can you? But he's earnest. And what's more unnerving is that he's not even really frightened. He is in his total senses.

You look him once over. A little shorter than you, but an Inch or so. Stocky build, but with these intense blue eyes like he can convince you of anything if you just looked into them long enough. But you never heard of a Scientist with a Mohawk, have you?

Damn society. Teaching you to trust attractive people, regardless of gender. The words take hold... but you just can't leave Lincoln there to die, even if he's a pain in the ass.

"This is something to think about, and at most we can keep an eye on him in case... something.. happens.  But will you be able to sleep for the rest of you life knowing that we left him to die if these people are crazed and going to tear him apart on the spot?"

"Are we going to live at all if I'm right?"

You want to make a come back, but you just can't. Instead you turn to Lincoln. "Can you walk?"

"Jesus Christ, this hurts so bad. I can fucking walk, but damn..."

"Alright," you say. "Arm yourself with what you can. I think we're leaving. We don't know if those people left to get away from us or get help."

Raph has dropped his ever present pipe for a long wooden pole as tall as he is. Six foot if not a few inches  more. He leans it on his lean and muscular frame, keeping an eye out by the windows, but not in front. He's not dumb. His features are chiseled, brought out more when he's sitting there pondering... possibly even fearing what's outside. Poor guy. If tonight wasn't so crazy, he brought could have gotten someone to hook up with him easily.

Bobby and Nicolette seemed at opposite ends of the spectrum. Bobby was tall and slender, an attractive glasses-wearer with a very intelligent look on her face. It was an odd choice that she grabbed a fire extinguisher until she noticed your look. She picked it up in both hands and thrust it forward at heavy level. A good blunt weapon.

Nicolette, small and cute, moved with a grace of a ballerina as she searched through the place for something to arm herself with. It was very obvious this isn't her cup of tea. It also looked like she was going through this in a haze, like the situation was sinking in, but not really. You are almost convinced she followed orders in a machine-like trance as her mind was trying to distance herself from the situation, lest she crumble about.

Out of the corner of your eye, you see Raph bend down to pick up the pipe and walk it over to the water cooler. He turns it on, trying his best to clean off the red stuff and then dry it off when it looks like he's done all he can do. He walks it over to Nicolette wth a smile. "It'll be a shame to leave her behind. She's a sturdy ole gal." It was the first time you saw Nicolette smile. People would take on incredible odds to see a smile like that again.

A wiry skinny guy, Lincoln didn't look like he would be type to do much damage with a melee weapon if he had one. Add that along with the fact that he's injured and lost a bit of blood made his choice of the kitchen knife a very good one. It's a serious cutting knife, which you just have to assume someone brought in with their lunch. Besides, he has that now popular nerdcore look that's been driving the indie girls wild lately. He's probably more of a lover than a fighter.

There's a display honoring what you assume was the ticket worker's victory over the conductors in a baseball game. Along with the trophy, they put up a glove, a baseball and a bat. Brent decides to put that bat to good use.

"Ok, everyone got something?"

The group lifts up and shows their various armaments.

"Good. I don't know about the rest of you," Brent states. "..but I need to get over to Molly. Our friends' apartment is just in the 60's. It's not far from here. Damn the knowledge, I just need to see her safe."

"Don't you think that's kind of far, Dude? I don't want to sound like a wuss, but I did lose a bit of blood. What we can do is go to that Verizon building just down the street. It's a hub, so it always has the ability to communicate... or so I've heard." Lincoln actually reasons. No cursing. Just an honest to goodness idea.

Raph chimes in. "If we're going to go that far, we might as well go to that police station in Times Square. Even if there's no one there, there might be better things to arm ourselves with."

"Times Square, huh," Bobby muses out loud. Are there news stations and the like there? There might be some information about what's going on. Or, at least what they thought was happening before it happened."

Nicolette looks at you. You don't know why. Perhaps it's because you semi saved her. "Do you need to be some place?"

"Yeah, I came here to go to my friend's uncle's condo at Central Park West. Thing is a fortress and it's on the 14th floor... but it's in the 100's. 60 blocks from here."

Nicolette looks at each of your group. "So, what sounds best?"

---

Ensemble your Squad.

Two groups of three. One group on point, one group to cover the rear

Option 1.) The Verizon Communications. About a five minute walk from here.
Option 2.) Nearest Police Station in Times Square. About a ten minute walk from where you are.
Option 3.) The news stations in Time Square. About a fifteen minute walk from here.
Option 4.) Molly and Brent's friends place in the 60's. About an hour away
Option 5.) Your friend's condo. A few hours walking
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"

Offline Majestrix

  • Sociopathic Queen of Evil Ponies
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 8,636
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • The Sociopathic Queen Of Evil. And Ponies.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #17 on: August 27, 2008, 04:35:40 AM »
I would say Option 1 with moving onto Option 2 if you get there and there is nothing there.  Assuming you survive the 5 minute trek.  That is.
She broke your heart and inadvertently led men to deviant lifestyles.

Offline sinic

  • Certified Organic
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 7,530
  • Renown: +0/-0
  • Slack.
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #18 on: August 27, 2008, 06:06:45 AM »
Probably best to try the comm center to find out what's going on.  From there go to the police station to rearm and then start the trek uptown (or whichever direction) to get Molly and then to the Condo.
"All it takes for evil to triumph is for good men to do nothing." – Edmund Burke

http://sinicfug.mybrute.com/

Offline The Revolution

  • Epic War Beast Zombie Killer
  • Member
  • **
  • Posts: 5,017
  • Renown: +1/-0
  • "I'll Ruin Your Day, Son."
    • View Profile
The Descent: A Darker CyOA in the vein of "Silent Hill"
« Reply #19 on: August 27, 2008, 01:15:09 PM »
The group naturally falls into place. Raph is in the front, with Brent and You on his right and left flank respectfully. You all take point as the girls flank Lincoln, who's still a little wobbly on his feet. It was tough trying to convince Brent, especially when you had your own people to look out after, but compromise was that you both could probably touch with their respected love ones by phone instead of dreading their unknown fate with each step was a particularly attractive one.

The walk out of Grand Central was semi uneventful. You do notice that still, the luminescence of the light in the room does not affect the darkness outside. There is a clear border of of light and darkness at the frame of the door. You don't know if you should say anything, but that's just not right.

Your light works fine, though, adding more questions in your mind. Brent shines the way as you leave the ticket office and slowly make your way to the 42 and Vanderbuilt exit. More folded Stacks of clothing. More lost souls. Are you lucky to have survived?

The door opens to a horror movie. Cars are upended, thrown and strewn across the street and sidewalk. There are no folded clothes here. Most are ashed, but some still have bodies in them... Beaten, bloody, barely human. Debris clutters each step as some took to looting... but that very act probably cost them their lives.You hear more roving stampedes off in the distance, which in and of itself is alarming. Any other day, you can barely hear anything more than seven feet away from you, the city is so bustling. These stampedes seem to be blocks away.

You make your way West towards the building, keeping on 42nd. The Group huddles into building entryways and stays quiet the second you hear more stampedes. Occasionally, these stampedes end with frightened screams for help.. and then what you can only assume are death rattles. This isn't a game. This is life or death.

You all are careful, mindful of each step. The building draws nearer in sight, but you restrain yourself from running into it and locking the door. Who knows out there?

When you are a block away from the building, just at the middle of the park on 42nd street, a choir of shrill shrieks directly in front of you sound in the night air. Another choir sounds. And another. More and more join in the night sky. There's even one choir that sounds like it's on the other side of the park, on 40th street. You all look at each other in fear.

Then the booms begin again, still earth shaking. The group manages to make it into an entry way and stops to observe. The shrill shrieks abate, and so do the booms. You can hear a multitude of death rattles in the distance, and God help you, what seems to be loud, very loud chewing. The stampedes move away from the sounds of the chewing, and you can't blame them.

The sound that you heard before in the train bellows out into the air. It even seems louder now. You all cover your heads and ears, trying to block out this absolutely deafening sound. As soon as it stops, you feel the booms again. If these booms are even, there will be at least 5 before they stop again.

You can make it to building in those earthshaking booms, strong enough to shake cars around. Maybe even in between two of them. But you're pretty sure you need to make it off of the street.

Option 1.) Head to the Verizon Communications during the booms. It might mask the sound of your movements so those stampedes won't catch on to you... if you can manage to keep your footing. (1-10 Evens/Odd)
Option 2.) Head to the Verizon Communications between the booms. With luck, those stampedes might think you're just another one of them, whatever they are. (1-10 Evens/Odd)
Option 3.) Huddle in the entry way to see what those stampedes are... assuming they come back this way.
Option 4.) Break into the building of the entryway you're hiding out in and try to spy on these stampedes from there. (1-10 Evens/Odd)
Option 5.) Rethink your destination from the list in the last post
"I'm literally Angry with RAGE!"
" I am the Hammer. I am the Hate. I am the woes of Daemonkind."
"My geek infests lives with awesome!"
Body of Christ!! <-- click it --> If you walk without Rhythm, It Won't Attract The Worm!
                                |
                                v
         "They don't like it when you shoot at them, I've worked that out myself!"